Put your hands together.
posted by Chris Graf at 1:41 PM
His left forearm looks really weird. I think its because its shorter than his upper arm. But other than that, I likes. You should colour it sometime....you know...when you actually scan it. :)
woah! nice character designs, very dynamic! I'll be back again, and thanks for the comment :)
Well Well Well Lets see here as I said before I like it alot there are just those small things a person see's that one may not agree with the way you have gone abuot a certain thing. Take from this what you will and leave behind what you can't carry.Since this dude is bordering along the realm of anatomically correct, you lose alot of artistic liberation from things becoming wonkey or out of place.. For instance the Abs of this guy, they are not so much incorrect as they are mispalced. you have the bulge of upper ribcage (which is nice) but it coneccts directly to what seems to be one large Ab that runs down the fron't of his stomach, This looks wrong to me. The bulge that you have there needs to be pulled to the right alot where it should connect with the characters left Lat adn then down into the hip and buttocks. which leads me to my next point. the hips of this characters seem none exsistant and the cloth seems to be used more as a way to cover up the fact that u don't know whats going on below the Ab region. His left arm is nice but you lose it when it comes to the way the ahnd is coneccting to the forearm.. there shouldn't be that many planes between the wrist and thumb. I would like to see some better seperation between the beard and faces. just so the face stand out more. and it would be nice if the characters right arm could be dropped down to have some negative space between his bicep and body. Also his index finger on his right arm seem s to resemble a toe more then a finger sicne you have the last flange dropping down like that... You knwo you have done alot right with this peice. im jsut tearing apart casue you asked me to.. I hope the things I has listed today will help you out in the future.(c 0_o)-DAN-
Man i love the idea of zeus and your have drawn him really well i love it
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