I guess the first thing is, I get thrown off instanly because the pose needs that back leg, i realize you have probably ran out of room, but what if you tried to redraw it on bigger paper or a smaller size character.
Also, other then the thumb pointing at his chest, the pose isnt really saying, 'pride'. I just fele the body could bang home the 'pride' more.
One more nasty picky thing, the pointing hand is a different style then his otehr hand. One has skinny tips the other has fat tips.
Yeah I'm not really getting pride from this so much as he's just a jerk. I really like the face, but again, its pride cause he's like "im better than you" but not banging it home. Also about the hands, ive seen better from you, id rather see a fully clenched fist than what you have. Push this more and you'll be on track.
I don't think your pushing hard enough... crits are great and a understanding of anatomy can help but I find when I really wanna draw I just grab that pencil like a knife and pretend and have at the paper...sometime if I push hard enough i draw the same thing on like 9 ot 10 peices of paper...think about it.... sorry you wnated a marshall so you got one
when i think pride, i think face into the wind, on a cliff, top of the world type stuff...you know, that's how you got to where you are now and, damn, it feels good.
i think this pic could be reworked with a mirror for vanity
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I guess the first thing is, I get thrown off instanly because the pose needs that back leg, i realize you have probably ran out of room, but what if you tried to redraw it on bigger paper or a smaller size character.
Also, other then the thumb pointing at his chest, the pose isnt really saying, 'pride'. I just fele the body could bang home the 'pride' more.
One more nasty picky thing, the pointing hand is a different style then his otehr hand. One has skinny tips the other has fat tips.
Sorry, you wanted an elder, so i gave one to yea.
haha...thanx dude. you went easy on me!
Yeah I'm not really getting pride from this so much as he's just a jerk. I really like the face, but again, its pride cause he's like "im better than you" but not banging it home. Also about the hands, ive seen better from you, id rather see a fully clenched fist than what you have. Push this more and you'll be on track.
fun character drawing! :)
Great drawing, I think you can still push the "pride" pose more though. You have a great style and a nice clean line.
I don't think your pushing hard enough... crits are great and a understanding of anatomy can help but I find when I really wanna draw I just grab that pencil like a knife and pretend and have at the paper...sometime if I push hard enough i draw the same thing on like 9 ot 10 peices of paper...think about it.... sorry you wnated a marshall so you got one
when i think pride, i think face into the wind, on a cliff, top of the world type stuff...you know, that's how you got to where you are now and, damn, it feels good.
i think this pic could be reworked with a mirror for vanity
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